Talking about awards given in Australia to Korean cultural influences, they say:
Others were awarded as follow; Hyun-Sook Hwang in Korean Literature sector, So-Hyun Park in Dance sector, Ok-Jin Jang in Painting.
They’ve managed to fit an amazing number of grammar errors into a very small text:
- a singular/plural error (“follow”)
- several missing articles
- a missing conjunction
Even worse calling literature the “Literature Sector” makes it sound like an industrial product, or something out of a 1940’s Soviet 5-year plan.
Nice picture though. ^^